No comments other than you should use some more darker/bass notes/sounds with the other melodies.
No comments other than you should use some more darker/bass notes/sounds with the other melodies.
Thanks for advice!!
Love the intro <3 As someone already said. It could have been like 20sec shorter. I didn't really like the transition claps you used at 01:37 (and on other parts of the song) and the synth starting there going on until 01:55 could have had a better sound.
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, the claps do really bother me as well now after the release :/ maybe I'll update the sound file with a shortened intro and without these crappy claps :D
Najs. Me too! I miss that standard slow kick-snare drumbeat on top of this though.
i tried to make a drum beat with it but.... i suck at making decent drum beats
i wanted to actually go with a slow kick-snare drum beat but i couldn't find or tweak any one shots to fit with this
The song is a bit high pitched and I think it would sound better with a different synth. Make some parts with higher pitch and some with lower. I'm just saying It could sound a lot better. Good luck!
Thanks for advice! I could always use some.
Neato. Keep it up! ʢ• ͡•ʢ• ͡•ʢ• ͡•ʡ
il try n__n thank for the review <3
- Pandasticality
Ok. Off the top of my head. I can't pin point what it is but I didn't really like the pad even though an ambient pad fits this kind of music. I like the beat at 01:02. A bridge or something would fit in good at ~01:30 with a delay transition because then the wobble won't get misused. I don't know jack sh*t about music production so take this with a grain of salt. Best of luck to ya! ♬♪♫ ヾ(*・。・)ノ ♬♪♫
Much thanks for the feedback :3 I know this will sound weird, but I can agree with most of what you've said, to be honest. I should've been more conscientious about the layers but nah. past me was lazy. present me is lazyer. Again, Thanks for the thorough feedback <3
I don't know what I expected but this was really good. I hope to hear more like this!! ヾ(^∇^)
Hope to make more like this. :) Thanks!
I'm really impressed by the beginning!
Yes, was a intro I used...
Thanks for liking my song...
I like how you create an atmosphere in your music. You should try a go at ambient dnb like Phaeleh. I think it would fit your style.
Thx for the review :). Glad you liked it :D. Thx for the tip, I'll go check out Phaeleh ;).
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