You make great music ヘ( ̄ω ̄ヘ)
You make great music ヘ( ̄ω ̄ヘ)
Never heard you before but this is good stuff (⑅ ॣ•͈૦•͈ ॣ)꒳ᵒ꒳ᵎᵎᵎ
10 years later and still good (´,,•ω•,,)♡
Really n1. You should be able to get a glimpse of what the whole song is gonna sound like from the start like a Pilot and you nailed that. I don't feel there's a real hook in the song but I like it anyway. It sounds a bit cluttered with the synths around the 1 minute mark, maybe you could've dampened the synths or something to make space for the vocals. (゜▼゜*)
well thank you very much for detailed review,I find helpful when people actualy listen to my songs and comment...every criticism is welcome I look forward for more of those.
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Sounds like something made from Kraftwerk ೭੧(❛▿❛✿)੭೨
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Well made as usual. Got me thinking about Harvest Moon for some reason.
Thanks! Never played or listened but hey
This is some great stuff! Miss the sound of drums though.
Don't worry it's an opening track. There's going to be tons of drums on the album.
Some thoughts. The cymbal is a tad too loud. If it's a separate sample/loop maybe lower the volume or use a limiter to turn down the sound peaks. I feel like there's a bit too much going on at 01:39. You could try and remove the drums at the end of a pattern there to make the bass louder and so that the drumbeat takes up too much of the song. I don't know much about music so take this with a huge grain of salt. Keep on truckin!
Yeah, the cymbals may be too loud; originally, I thought panning them out in different directions would partially resolve that. I aimed to use cymbals just as a little bit of background noise but it eventually got to be more than that. I think that might be due in part to overzealous EQing and putting a maximizer on the master bus.
I tried to switch it up and/or fake listeners out @ 1:39, but giving it another listen I see it just sounds kind of out-of-place and awkward.
Anyways, thanks for the helpful input.
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